Last night's post reminded me of this poem I wrote for an 11th grade creative writing class. It reflects a typical exchange at the dinner table while I was growing up. Here it is, unedited. I must have written it during my ellipsis period, which I believe may also be known as a period period period.
"At the Dinner Table"
Do you want some more?
Hmm . . . what?
I said,
Do you want some more peas?
Why?
Will you just answer?
Well . . . I don't know . . .
Do you want some more?
You can have them.
But do you want them?
No,
That's all right . . .
You can have them . . .
I DON'T WANT THEM --
You can have them . . .
Honest.
All right,
If you're sure you don't want them . . .
1 comment:
That cracked me up! Perfect!
Love ya,
Mom
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